Excerpt from THE CHRISTMAS VISITORS
This is the introduction to my recently published ebook. It's $2.99 and $2.00 of that goes to World Vision. Available for Kindle, from Amazon.
This is the story of a family who thought they knew
what was important.
In some
ways, they were right about what was important.
They were right like a lot of people in American are right. Family is important, they would say. That’s why the parents, Lee and Roberta, had
three children—Becca, 15, Ryan, 14, and Sarah Marie, 12-- whom they loved very
much, and why they worked hard to provide for them. Faith is important, they would say. That’s why they made sure they spent a good
chunk of time on Sundays at their church and sought to teach the children about
God. Hard work is important, they would
say. The children never had any doubt
about that; they saw their dad, a high school principal in their town, work
long hours, and their mom, who ran her own business, work even harder balancing
everything at home and at her florist shop.
So Lee
and Roberta were right, but they were wrong, too. They lost track of some things that were
important, like fun, neighbors, and stopping.
Yes, stopping. They lost track of
why important things are important. And
they lost track of the most important thing—each other. Not just the each other of Lee, Roberta,
Becca, Ryan, and Sarah Marie, but all the each others.
Now
that you know a little bit about five of the characters in the story, we can
get started with what really happened, although you’ll meet some other people
in the story. Two of them—well, three
actually, are from another country, and came a long way to get to be in our
story. And of course for any story to be
good there has to be what the English teachers call an antagonist but children
call the bad guy. Except that this
character is not so much a bad guy as someone who’s just confused and mistaken
and wants everybody else to be confused and mistaken, too. There are a few other odd characters here and
there, but those nine are the main ones.
If the
story has to have a main character, it would have to be Roberta, because in
novel writing school they tell us that the main character has to change, and
the person who changes the most is Roberta.
And, since it’s a woman writing this story, it’s just easier that
way. But Lee changes, and Becca, Ryan,
and Sarah Marie, too. Actually,
everybody does, because, well, the thing I forgot to tell you about this story
is that it happens at Christmas time, and aren’t people supposed to change at
Christmas time? That’s what happens on
the TV shows, right? Aren’t we all
supposed to get nicer and friendlier because of that elusive thing called “the
Christmas spirit”? The problem with the
Christmas spirit is that it goes away sometime after December 27 or so, and
what happens to Roberta, and Lee, and the other characters is a pretty
permanent change.
Oops! I’m giving too much away. You won’t want to read it then. So I’ll stop and just get on with it.
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